GED GED-Writing 問題集 : GED Language Arts - Writing (Essay Writing Exam)

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Sentence Van Gogh, in his paintings, and beliefs, was a champion of the lower classes.
Which correction should be made to sentence 3?

• A. remove the comma after Gogh
• B. insert a comma after lower
• C. change beliefs to believes
• D. remove the comma after paintings
• E. remove the comma after beliefs

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Which revision would improve the effectiveness of this letter?

• A. sentence 11
• B. sentence 12
• C. sentence 5
• D. sentence 7
• E. sentence 4

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How to Bake a Sicilian Pizza at Home
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• A. Since the conventional oven at home cannot produce such intense heat, you must use a conventional oven equipped with a pizza stone.D.An oven of this kind preheated for half an hour will make you a very good pizza.
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• B. change generates to generate
• C. Generally, you start with the bread dough, putting on some toppings, and bake the pizza
  in the oven.(6) However, you must first preheat the oven to 500 degrees for at least a half an hour.(7) After preheating the oven divide the dough into four equal balls.(8) There are, however, a few specific steps to follow for successfully making a pizza at home (9) Flatten one of the balls and stretch them with your hands into a circle.(10) Next, place the dough on a metal or wooden baking sheet that has been dusted with flour, then coat the dough with tomato sauce and other toppings, including a drizzle of olive oil.(11) Finally, for the best effect, slide the dough from the baking sheet onto the pizza stone.(12) Baking for about 15 minutes until the bottom is cooked and the edges are brown.
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  There is other important things to remember as you make your own pizza.(14) Make sure that your dough is soft so that it is easy to work with.(15) Also, to avoid creating a soggy pizza, you should use tomato sauce sparingly.(16) Now you are ready to enjoy a pizza at home that is the equal to that of your favorite pizza parlor.(17) Bon appetit! -- Exhibit -Sentence The reason is that wood-fired brick ovens at the pizza parlor generates the intense heat needed to create fine pizza. Which correction should be made to sentence 2?
• D. change needed to needing
• E. Its almost impossible to bake a Sicilian pizza at home like those pizzas baked in your hometown pizza parlor.B.The reason is that wood-fired brickovens at the pizza parlor generates the intense heat needed to create fine pizza.
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• F. change is to are
• G. change create to creates
• H. insert a comma after ovens

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Sentence Avoid cutting your grass too short on hot, sunny days, the lawn will quickly dry out and burn. Which is the best way to write the underlined portion of this sentence? If the original is the best way, choose optionA.

• A. short.Because on hot, sunny
• B. short on hot, sunny
• C. short.Hot, sunny
• D. short, as a result, on hot, sunny
• E. short.On hot, sunny

-- Exhibit- -- Exhibit -Sentence How we provide you with such a service? Which is the best way to write the underlined portion of this sentence? If the original is the

best way, choose optionA.

• A. we providing
• B. we provide
• C. do we provide
• D. is we providing
• E. we provided